(The bat is the "surprise.")
The Undead: A
Blood-Curdling Book
It
was the middle of the night. Someone was
selling candy. He was almost done when
he came upon a castle. He was curious. He snuck up to the door and opened it.
It
was not long before he came to some coffins.
He leaped in surprise, then....
“I
vow to suck your blood,” said a voice.
A
coffin swung open.... A horrible
creature with long white fangs jumped out.
He ran for his life, but he could not run any farther.
“No
no no! Please, no! No!
NO! NO!”
The
blood-sucker bit the man’s neck. It
splattered with blood. He became a vampire.
The
next morning people heard the story and returned to the castle with stakes and
mallets. But the men did not make
it. But someone did.
He
held his stake close to the vampire’s heart.
He hammered the mallet. Crack! How the vampire screamed and howled, but it
was too late.
He
was dead.
That was a very gory story! You did a good job writing and illustrating it!
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